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it's sweet and i love it!!

thank you :D

Wow spanish TL thanks

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One of the nicest short renpy story I encountered so far. The art/music/writing/and the kinda original way the text is laid.

This is a shiny little jewel. Thanks you creators, be proud, you'd totally deserve lot of endless praise <3


The sad ending made my throat go all stiffy :<

Awww, thank you so much.  I'm so glad you enjoy it.

Fun and sweet little game. Worth checking out.

Hello, I just downloaded the game and gave it a go, it was quite enjoyable!
Yet, I'm looking forward to give it a proper Spanish translation, if so, please, let me know.

Sure thing. DM me on Twitter, same username

Aww it was so sweet! I really enjoyed playing it, loved the way you mixed text UI together! Banger music track too, loved it!

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Hiii! I'm the composer, Jeroz told me about your comment so I just gotta say thankyou so much!!! Super glad ya liked ^_^

You did a great job with it!

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I like how you threw a very active and a very (supposedly) passive character together, and created some interesting dynamics between them. Plus, the cuteness. ;)

I especially enjoyed the "breaking out of her shell" ending, if you can call it that, although both endings are sweet, indeed.

A noteworthy thing: The opening screen (the main menu) really set up a nice mood. It was this screen with both its music and its simple, yet effective visuals that drew me in. Whoever designed that: Nice job, because first impressions count! :)

An unfulfilled wish #1: I would've loved to see a CG with both of them looking at those comets! I mean, it's even in the title! Like, it's in the title! But probably not in the budget? ;)

An unfulfilled wish #2: The art appears to focus on Julie, which is nice, given her looks and all, but I would've really liked to see more of Dina as well. She just seems more like "my kind of girl", I guess. ;)

Bottom line: Pretty decent job, I liked it. Will leave a few coins behind, because it's worth it.

Please keep creating!

I'm glad you like this a lot. I personally like constantly shifting dynamics, so having asymmetrical character types is fun to write.

Yeah unfortunately we ran out of time wrt to CG production, I could draw one in a future devlog post.I got think a couple more old sketches of Dina which I can share as well if you like.

Yes, please do share them with us, if you can find the time for it!

Thanks! :)

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That was great! Top notch yuri! (Julie and Dina are so cute together...!!) Loved the menu animation and the art too.

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ikr, aren't they just the cutest?

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It was a nice and sweet story and I enjoyed both the endings. The music, animation and story all fit together very nicely too. :)

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I really enjoyed this, it was so heartwarming, sweet and i like some of the space talk, i love space in general so it really peaked my interest, even though it seemed more futuristic, i hope you didnt mind by i decide to make a few youtube videos of it as a kind of mini series to hopefully get more people to experience this hidden gem, i'm a small channel but i still want people to see your amazing work, keep it up :)


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oh no, please go ahead. I highly welcome it. Thank you so much

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Im glad :) I hope more people download this game

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Cute,short story,i enjoyed it a lot.

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Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it.